Hi there Ella, my name is Jedi and I am a student in room 5 at yaldhurst school. I really like your poem about moving into a new house. It made me think of me moving it was scary but fun. Have you thought about a title? I love your poem!
Hi Ella This is Mrs B from Ohaeawai School. I enjoyed reading your Moving House poem. It sounds like your mum and dad have been working really hard.I hope you all have lots of lovely times in your new house.Have you thought about what's missing from the end of your pink line in the poem.
Hi there Ella, my name is Jedi and I am a student in room 5 at yaldhurst school. I really like your poem about moving into a new house. It made me think of me moving it was scary but fun. Have you thought about a title?
ReplyDeleteI love your poem!
Thanks for your comment i really appreciate your comment and i have not thought of a title i will put a title on it.
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ReplyDeleteThis is Mrs B from Ohaeawai School. I enjoyed reading your Moving House poem. It sounds like your mum and dad have been working really hard.I hope you all have lots of lovely times in your new house.Have you thought about what's missing from the end of your pink line in the poem.
hi Ella i love your moving poem
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